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notWe - Owca

Updated: Sep 4, 2021



Director - Patrycja Korol


Genre - alternative, rock

Duration - 3 minutes 35 seconds

Country - Poland

Language - Polish

Year - 2021



SYNOPSIS : Scene 1 - city - Outdoor / evening


Couple, timelapse through the city. Trams, traffic. Couple getting on the tram, the plan goes backwards.


Lie, lie, please lie

Say that you Love Me

Oxygen, oxygen, running out

Say you have more of it for me

More for me


Scene 2 - Outdoor / evening


A couple sitting on chairs in front of the TV. They are blindfolded. Noise on the TV. They sit statically on chairs. The girl is eating popcorn. Transfers to the scenes on the tram. The scenes on the tram alternate with the shots of the couple sitting on the loop.


Ref:

Why the nerves, what this pit for

We're stuck here, we're stuck here

We're stuck here, we're stuck here, we're stuck here


In a house with no lights

In sentences without words

We are united only by the sight of frost

We're stuck here, we're stuck here, we're stuck here


Scene 3 - tram - Interior -night


Couple on the tram, they hug. She sits on his lap, staring each other in the eye. Close up to the hands, close up to the face, to the eyes. They smile, they kiss.

Cutting

She screams, hits him on the shoulder.

Cutting

She looks sadly through the glass, he is sitting behind her, pushing her hair behind her ear. They drive in tram in silence.


The truth, tell the truth

Let me guess, we weren't really here

We were just a half-joke

A quick burst and a descent

Polluted city, icy driveway

A familiar face met by chance, in the morning, at the bar

Hi - hello


Scene 4 - tram loop - Outdoor / night


A couple sitting on chairs in front of the TV. They are blindfolded. Noise on the TV. They sit statically on chairs.

Slider - moving sideways next to the TV.

Duble plan on a couple. The TV sets on the snowy screen of their shots from the tram.


Scene 5 - tram loop / tram - Open air / evening


Couple getting on the tram, the plan goes backwards.

Departure from the TV. The duble plan on couple, snowing effect on them. He takes off the blindfold, sees she is still sitting eating popcorn.

He pulls the blindfold off the girl. Popcorn falls to the ground.


Ref:

Why the nerves, what this pit for

We're stuck here, we're stuck here

We're stuck here, we're stuck here, we're stuck here


In a house with no lights

In sentences without words

We are united only by the sight of frost

We're stuck here, we're stuck here, we're stuck here


He looks at the TV set, kneels in front of it, sees them on the screen.

Goes crazy, throws the TV.


To laugh or cry

What's this fun?

We are - lonely


Laugh or cry?

What's this fun?


Scene 6 - tram loop / tram - Open air / evening


They look at each other, she is looking into his eyes.

Repeating shots from the tram, the couple is laughing together, looking at each other, hugging.


Ref:

Why the nerves, what this pit for

We're stuck here, we're stuck here

We're stuck here, we're stuck here, we're stuck here


In a house with no lights

In sentences without words

We are united only by the sight of frost

We're stuck here, we're stuck here, we're stuck here


They are both sitting withoutthe blindfold, looking at each other. The duble plan from the loop is intertwined with the duble plan from the tram.

Again shot of the couple getting on the tram ...


Ref:

Why the nerves, what this pit for

We're stuck here, we're stuck here

We're stuck here, we're stuck here, we're stuck here


In a house with no lights

In sentences without words


Scene 7 - tram loop - Outdoor / evening


The boy gets up from the chair, takes the girl's hand, a shot of the scattered popcorn, a blindfold, a broken TV set.


We are united only by the sight of frost

We're stuck here, we're stuck here, we're stuck here


In a house with no lights

In sentences without words

We are united only by the sight of frost

We're stuck here, we're stuck here, we're stuck here


Rear shot of the departing couple, television noise on them.


DMOFF AWARD -

Official Selection September 2021

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